formatting and acknowledgements

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-I would like to thank everyone that helped me writing thesis. This includes but
+I would like to thank everyone helping me writing this thesis. This includes but

 is not limited to Rinus and Pieter for the support, supervision and weekly
 is not limited to Rinus and Pieter for the support, supervision and weekly

-sparring. Bas for providing the needed \gls{iTasks} support. Arjan for the
+sparring. Bas, for providing the needed \gls{iTasks} support. Arjan, for the

 sparring and coffee. George, Camil and others\todo{proofreaders}\ for
 sparring and coffee. George, Camil and others\todo{proofreaders}\ for

-proofreading and  Camil for lifting \emph{Cloogle} to a solid search engine I
-used daily. Finally I would like to thank my family, friends and wife for
-listening to a year of endless rambling on this.
+proofreading and Camil for lifting \emph{Cloogle} to a robust search engine I
+used daily. Finally, I would like to thank my family, friends and wife for
+listening to my year of endless rambling on the subject.