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@@ -47,10 +47,10 @@ Expressions in the \gls{mTask}-\gls{EDSL} are divided into two types, namely
 boolean expressions and arithmetic expressions. The class of arithmetic
 language constructs also contains the function \CI{lit} that lifts a
 host-language value in to the \gls{EDSL} domain. All standard arithmetic
-functions are included but are omitted for brevity. Moreover the class
-restrictions are only shown in the first functions and are later omitted. Both
-the boolean expression and arithmetic expression classes are shown in
-Listing~\ref{lst:arithbool}.
+functions are included in the \gls{EDSL} but are omitted in the example for
+brevity. Moreover, the class restrictions are only shown in the first functions
+and omitted in subsequent funcitons. Both the boolean expression and arithmetic
+expression classes are shown in Listing~\ref{lst:arithbool}.
 
 \begin{lstlisting}[language=Clean,label={lst:arithbool},
        caption={Basic classes for expressions}]
@@ -69,13 +69,13 @@ class boolExpr v where
 \section{Control flow}
 Looping of \glspl{Task} happens because \glspl{Task} are launched at regular
 intervals or relaunch themselves. Therefore there is no need for loop control
-flow functionality such as \CI{While} or \CI{For} constructions. The main
-control flow is the sequence operator and the \CI{If} statement. Both are shown
-in Listing~\ref{lst:control}. The first class of \CI{If} statements describe
-the regular if statement. The expressions given can have any role. The
-functional dependency on \CI{s} determines the return type of the statement.
-The sequence operator is very straightforward and just ties the two expressions
-together in sequence.
+flow functionality such as \emph{while} or \emph{for} constructions. The main
+control flow is the sequence operator and the \emph{if} statement. Both are
+shown in Listing~\ref{lst:control}. The first class of \emph{If} statements
+describe the regular \emph{if} statement. The expressions given can have any
+role. The functional dependency on \CI{s} determines the return type of the
+statement.  The sequence operator is very straightforward and just ties the two
+expressions together in sequence.
 
 \begin{lstlisting}[%
        language=Clean,label={lst:control},caption={Control flow operators}]
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ class assign v where
 \end{lstlisting}
 
 A way of storing data in \glspl{mTask} is using \glspl{SDS}. \glspl{SDS} serve
-as variables in the \gls{mTask} and will keep their value across executions.
+as variables in the \gls{mTask} and maintain their value across executions.
 The classes associated with \glspl{SDS} are listed in
 Listing~\ref{lst:sdsclass}. The \CI{Main} class is introduced to box an
 \gls{mTask} and make it recognizable by the type system.
@@ -134,11 +134,11 @@ class sds v where
 
 \section{Example mTask}
 \todo{Also explain semantics about running tasks}
-Some example \glspl{mTask} using almost all of the functionality are show in
+Some example \glspl{mTask} using almost all of the functionality are shown in
 Listing~\ref{lst:exmtask}. The \glspl{mTask} shown in the example do not belong
 to a particular view and therefore are of the type \CI{View t r}. The
 \CI{blink} \gls{mTask} show the classic \emph{Arduino} \emph{Hello World!}
-application that blinks a certain LED every interval. The \CI{thermostat}
+application that blinks a certain LED at each interval. The \CI{thermostat}
 \gls{mTask} will enable a digital pin powering a cooling fan when the analog
 pin representing a temperature sensor is too high. \CI{thermostat`} shows the
 same program but now using the assignment style \gls{GPIO}.