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@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 The glue in the system is written in \gls{iTasks}. Functions for managing
 devices, \glspl{Task} and \glspl{SDS} are created. An interface is made that
 allows an interactive management console for the \gls{mTask} system. This
-interface provides functionality to list shares, add tasks, remove tasks,
-administrate devices and view the state of the system.
+interface provides functionality to list \glspl{SDS}, add \glspl{Task}, remove
+\glspl{Task}, administrate devices and view the state of the system.
 
 \section{Integration}
 When the system starts up the devices residing in the \gls{SDS} must be cleaned
-up. It might be the case that they contain tasks, shares or errors. A user or
-programmer can then choose to reconnect some devices using the
+up. It might be the case that they contain \glspl{Task}, \glspl{SDS} or errors.
+A user or programmer can then choose to reconnect some devices using the
 \CI{connectDevice} function.
 
 \begin{lstlisting}[caption={Starting up the devices},%
@@ -21,10 +21,11 @@ An image of the management interface is shown in Figure~\ref{lst:manage}.
 The system management is done by a single \gls{Task} called \CI{mTaskManager}.
 To manage the system, a couple of different functionalities are needed and
 are launched. The left sidebar of the interface shows the list of example
-\glspl{Task} that are present in the system. When clicking a task, a dialog
-opens in which you can select the device to send the task to.  The dialog might
-contain user specified variables. All example \glspl{mTask} are of the type
-\CI{Task (Main (ByteCode () Stmt))} and can thus ask for user input first.
+\glspl{Task} that are present in the system. When clicking a \gls{Task}, a
+dialog opens in which you can select the device to send the \gls{Task} to. The
+dialog might contain user specified variables. All example \glspl{mTask} are of
+the type \CI{Task (Main (ByteCode () Stmt))} and can thus ask for user input
+first.
 
 The bottom panel shows the device information. In this panel, the devices can
 be created and modified. Moreover, this panel allows the user to reconnect with
@@ -71,8 +72,8 @@ functions. \CI{sdsFocus} allows the programmer to fix the parameter.
 This allows the programmer to create filters and lenses. Both of the methods
 are not good enough for the device \gls{SDS} because they do not achieve the
 writing to the actual device. Writing to a device requires being able to write
-to shares. To solve this problem, a real base \gls{SDS} is created. All the
-details are visible in Listing~\ref{shareimpl}.
+to \glspl{SDS}. To solve this problem, a real base \gls{SDS} is created. All
+the details are visible in Listing~\ref{shareimpl}.
 \todo{elaborate}
 
 \begin{lstlisting}[label={lst:shareimpl},%