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-I would like to thank everyone that helped me writing thesis. This includes but
+I would like to thank everyone helping me writing this thesis. This includes but
 is not limited to Rinus and Pieter for the support, supervision and weekly
-sparring. Bas for providing the needed \gls{iTasks} support. Arjan for the
+sparring. Bas, for providing the needed \gls{iTasks} support. Arjan, for the
 sparring and coffee. George, Camil and others\todo{proofreaders}\ for
-proofreading and  Camil for lifting \emph{Cloogle} to a solid search engine I
-used daily. Finally I would like to thank my family, friends and wife for
-listening to a year of endless rambling on this.
+proofreading and Camil for lifting \emph{Cloogle} to a robust search engine I
+used daily. Finally, I would like to thank my family, friends and wife for
+listening to my year of endless rambling on the subject.