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@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 \section{iTasks}
-\gls{TOP} is a recent programming paradigm implemented as
+\gls{TOP} is a modern recent programming paradigm implemented as
 \gls{iTasks}\cite{achten_introduction_2015} in the pure lazy functional
 language \gls{Clean}\cite{brus_cleanlanguage_1987}. \gls{iTasks} is a
-\gls{EDSL} to model workflow tasks in the broadest sense. A \CI{Task} is just
+\gls{EDSL} to model workflow tasks in the broadest sense. A \gls{Task} is just
 a function that --- given some state --- returns the observable \CI{TaskValue}. The
 \CI{TaskValue} of a \CI{Task} can have different states. Not all state
 transitions are possible as shown in Figure~\ref{fig:taskvalue}. Once a value
@@ -42,6 +42,7 @@ enterName = enterInformation "Enter your name" []
 \end{lstlisting}
 
 \begin{figure}[H]
+	\centering
 	\begin{subfigure}{.25\textwidth}
 		\centering
 		\includegraphics[width=.9\linewidth]{taskex1}
@@ -60,12 +61,13 @@ enterName = enterInformation "Enter your name" []
 	\caption{Example of a generated user interface}
 \end{figure}
 
-For a type to be suitable it must have instances for a collection of generic
-functions that are captured in the class \CI{iTask}. Basic types have
+For a type to be suitable, it must have instances for a collection of generic
+functions that is captured in the class \CI{iTask}. Basic types have
 specialization instances for these functions and show an according interface.
 Generated interfaces can be modified with decoration operators.
 
 \section{Combinators}
+\todo{check and refine}
 \Glspl{Task} can be combined using so called \gls{Task}-combinators.
 Combinators describe relations between \glspl{Task}. \Glspl{Task} can be
 combined in parallel, sequenced and their result values can be converted to
@@ -117,7 +119,7 @@ Listing~\ref{lst:combinators}.
 (-&&-) infixr 4 :: (Task a) (Task b)              -> Task (a,b) | iTask a & iTask b
 \end{lstlisting}
 
-\section{\acrlongpl{SDS}}
+\section{Shared Data Sources}
 \Glspl{SDS} are an abstraction over resources that are available in the world
 or in the \gls{iTasks} system. The shared data can be a file on disk, it can be
 the time, a random integer or just some data stored in memory. The actual