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-The proposed system provides a bridge between the gap present in the current
-system. It provides a framework to offer functionality for an \gls{iTasks}
-server to outsource \glspl{Task} to \gls{IoT}-devices without needing to
-recompile the code. The \glspl{Task} targeted at \gls{IoT} devices are compiled
-at runtime to bytecode which is sent to the device for interpretation.
+A system has been researched and built and will be described in the following
+chapters. This novel system provides a bridge between to gap present in the
+current system explained in the introduction. It provides a framework to offer
+functionality for an \gls{iTasks} server to outsource \glspl{Task} to
+\gls{IoT}-devices without needing to recompile the code. The \glspl{Task}
+targeted at \gls{IoT} devices are compiled at runtime to bytecode which is sent
+to the device for interpretation.
 
 The following terms will be used throughout the following chapters:
 \begin{itemize}
 	\item Device, Client
 
-		These terms denotes the actual device connected to the system. This can
-		be a real device such as a microcontroller but it can also just be a
-		program on the same machine as the server functioning as a client.
+		These terms are used interchangeably and denote the actual device
+		connected to the system. This can be a real device such as a
+		microcontroller but it can also just be a program on the same machine
+		as the server functioning as a client.
 	\item Server, \gls{iTasks}-System
 
 		This is the actual executable serving the \gls{iTasks} application. The
 		system contains \glspl{Task} taking care of the communication with the
-		clients.
+		clients and infrastructure to manage the clients.
 	\item System
 
 		The system describes the complete ecosystem, containing both the server