Camil's comments: abstract

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-This thesis introduces a innovative way to connect small \gls{IoT} devices to
-high level \gls{TOP} implementations languages. It demonstrates how a novel
-frontend for the existing class-based shallowly \gls{EDSL} called \gls{mTask}
-by Koopman et al.\ --- written in \gls{Clean} --- can be employed to compile
-\gls{IoT}-\glspl{Task} on the fly and send them to devices as interpretable
-bytecode. All of which adheres to the \gls{TOP} philosophy where common
-concepts such as \glspl{SDS} and \gls{Task}-combinators are available at ease.
+This thesis introduces a innovative way to connect small Internet of Things
+devices to high level Task Oriented Programming implementations languages. The
+existing class-based shallowly Embedded Domain Specific Language called mTask
+by Koopman et al.\ --- written in Clean --- is extended with a new view to
+allow compilation of Internet of Things Tasks on the fly and send them to
+devices as interpretable bytecode. All introduced functionality adheres to the
+Task Oriented Programming philosophy where common concepts such as Shared Data
+Sources and Task-combinators are available at ease.

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 I would like to thank everyone who supported me during this thesis. This
 includes but is not limited to Rinus and Pieter for the supervision and weekly
 meetings. Bas, for providing \gls{iTasks} insight. Arjan, for sparring and
-coffee and George and Camil for proofreading the thesis. Finally, I would like
-to thank my family, friends and wife for listening to my year of endless
+coffee and George, Camil and Roy for proofreading the thesis. Finally, I would
+like to thank my family, friends and wife for listening to my year of endless
 rambling on the subject.