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 \begin{document}
 \frame{\titlepage}
-
+% Objective: what is the goal of this work, what problem is addressed, what was
+% the current state of the art, who is the work aimed at?
 \begin{frame}
-       \frametitle{Introduction}
+       \frametitle{Objective}
+       \begin{block}{Elaborate on the type system}
+               \begin{itemize}[<+->]
+                       \item Typed racket
+                       \item Implemented as macro
+                       \item No extra syntax or annotations
+                       \item Syntactical analyses
+               \end{itemize}
+       \end{block}
 \end{frame}
+% Proposal: if the paper presents a new idea, what, in a nutshell, is it?
+
+% Evidence: Support for claims - Theorems? Case studies? Simulations?
+
+% Benchmarks? Does evidence address issues needed to support claims?
+
+% Shoulders of giants...: what previous research does this work build on? What
+% are the key underlying theoretical ideas? Software infrastructure?
+
+% Impact: has this work been influential? When later research papers cite it,
+% what contribution is being referred to?
+
+% Writing: analyse the writing
+
+% Discussion points: end with questions which you think should arise 
+
 \end{document}