From: Mart Lubbers <mart@martlubbers.net>
Date: Wed, 16 Nov 2016 12:04:04 +0000 (+0100)
Subject:  Go to plural
X-Git-Url: https://git.martlubbers.net/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=0379c63ef9459b7c1b1fb76eebe806e8fcd67f8a;p=ssproject1617.git

 Go to plural
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diff --git a/report/v9_data.tex b/report/v9_data.tex
index 0e4e2f5..5a38911 100644
--- a/report/v9_data.tex
+++ b/report/v9_data.tex
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 		features.
 
 		\begin{result}
-			The login and page/post editing/creation forms post back to the same page, thereby incentivising the browser to cache the form inputs as well. This is as opposed to the common post/redirect/get model (see \url{http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Post/Redirect/Get}). Also, the \code{Cache-Control} isn't explicitly used anywhere in the \CMS{} to aid the situation. In my test setup, the response does send \code{Cache-Control:no-store, no-cache, must-revalidate, post-check=0, pre-check=0}, but that'll be a default global Apache setting, I think.
+			The login and page/post editing/creation forms post back to the same page, thereby incentivising the browser to cache the form inputs as well. This is as opposed to the common post/redirect/get model (see \url{http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Post/Redirect/Get}). Also, the \code{Cache-Control} isn't explicitly used anywhere in the \CMS{} to aid the situation. In our test setup, the response does send \code{Cache-Control:no-store, no-cache, must-revalidate, post-check=0, pre-check=0}, but that'll be a default global Apache setting, we think.
 		\end{result}
 
 	\notapplicable{\item Verify that the list of sensitive data processed by the
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 		\end{verbatim}
 
 		\begin{result}
-			Cache control header are never set by the \CMS{}. The fact that headers as these are indeed sent to the broswer in my test setup is probably due to default global Apache settings.
+			Cache control header are never set by the \CMS{}. The fact that headers as these are indeed sent to the broswer in our test setup is probably due to default global Apache settings.
 		\end{result}
 
 	\item\pass{} Verify that on the server, all cached or temporary copies
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 		variables, cookies and header values.
 
 		\begin{result}
-			The \CMS{} by no means sends any larger amount of parameters than would be expected, seen as it is but a simple app and mostly lacks extra functionality often leading to this kind of excessive parameter transferring, so I count this as a pass.
+			The \CMS{} by no means sends any larger amount of parameters than would be expected, seen as it is but a simple app and mostly lacks extra functionality often leading to this kind of excessive parameter transferring, so we count this as a pass.
 		\end{result}
 
 	\notapplicable{\item Verify the application has the ability to detect and alert