camil's comment chp5

diff --git a/system.edsl.tex b/system.edsl.tex
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@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 Not all \glspl{Task} are suitable to run on an \gls{IoT}-device and therefore
-an \gls{EDSL} is used to offer a constrained language that expresses \glspl{Task}
-for the new system. The \gls{mTask}-\gls{EDSL} shown in
-Chapter~\ref{chp:mtask} provides the language to create imperative programs that
-are suitable to run on microcontrollers. The \gls{EDSL}'s main view is a
+an \gls{EDSL} is used to offer a constrained language that expresses
+\glspl{Task} for the new system. The \gls{mTask}-\gls{EDSL} shown in
+Chapter~\ref{chp:mtask} provides the language to create imperative programs
+that are suitable to run on microcontrollers. The \gls{EDSL}'s main view is a
 \gls{C} code generator who's code compiles to \gls{Arduino} compatible
 microcontrollers. The big downside of this approach is the stiffness of the
 system. Once the code has been generated and the microcontroller has been
@@ -10,9 +10,11 @@ programmed, nothing can be changed to it anymore. \gls{IoT}-devices often have
 a limited amount of write cycles on their program memory available and
 therefore it is very expensive to keep recompiling and reprogramming the chips.
 To solve this problem, a new view is proposed for the \gls{mTask}-\gls{EDSL}
-which compiles the expressions not to \gls{C}-code, but to a bytecode format.
-To achieve this, several classes have been added to the \gls{mTask}-\gls{EDSL}.
-Not all of the functionality of the \gls{mTask} language is used.
+which compiles the expressions not to \gls{C}-code, but to a bytecode format
+which is interpetable and thus the need for reprogramming is removed. To
+achieve this, several classes have been added to the \gls{mTask}-\gls{EDSL}.
+Not all of the functionality of the \gls{mTask} language is needed or not
+implemented.
 
-The added functionality and implementation to the \gls{mTask}-\gls{EDSL} is
+The functionality and implementation added to the \gls{mTask}-\gls{EDSL} is
 shown in Chapter~\ref{chp:mtaskcont}.

diff --git a/system.tex b/system.tex
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-The system researched and built in this research provides a bridge between the
-gap present in the current system. It provides a framework to offer
+A system has been researched and built and will be described in the following
+chapters. This novel system provides a bridge between to gap present in the
+current system explained in the introduction. It provides a framework to offer
 functionality for an \gls{iTasks} server to outsource \glspl{Task} to
 \gls{IoT}-devices without needing to recompile the code. The \glspl{Task}
 targeted at \gls{IoT} devices are compiled at runtime to bytecode which is sent